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elude - Urban Escape and Evasion by swordfish

Notes: Jake = Fox

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There was a screech outside the pub and a Porsche stopped just outside the pub main doors. A women got out and made her way to the pub door.

"Don't touch the car - dickheads !" she shouted to the male onlookers. She made straight for Jake and lifted up her shades.

"Ready ?" she asked.

"Sure am." Jake replied.

"I am too !" said one of Jake's uncool friends.

"I seriously doubt that" said the women in a sarcastic tone.

They both left the pub, jumped into the Porsche and drove away.

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They pulled away with tires screeching and zoomed off down the road.

"I'm Jake, What's you name ?" enquired Jake hoping to befriend this astonishing woman. H started to dream about how cool he would look with this woman on his arm.

"Mind your own business !" came the unexpected replay. Jake's dream shattered.

"Oh ... I'm just trying to make friend here " said Jake feeling a bit hurt.

"We're not going to be together long enough to be friends." she continued "I have another pick-up later on"

"OK ... so where are we going ?" asked Jake.

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